WISHBLEED COMMENTS
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throwpup July 29, 2025 at 11:19:32 PM

this made me feel sick. the full circle use of the knot we see at start as a metaphor at the end, and nameswapping text was clever. you did a solid job evoking the emotions you were going for; something at the opposite end of what I usually create, which is cool to see fleshed out. i also appreciated how the ending looped back to the start / menu seamlessly. haven't really seem one that smooth since throughout the story you're pavloved into assuming the ripples lead to another scene.

nadia nova July 29, 2025 at 11:19:12 PM

reading this while hugging a plushie and loopy on the same type of fucked up shit ambrose was hooked on truly grants you an elevated reading experience. once again im in awe of the visual presentation of everything. you have an eye for the aesthetics and its so inspiring what you can do with your amazing photos and shader effects. and those portraits are so cute. just have to point it out aeuguhaaah i am so squeamish but i live for it. still. theres many ways to fix a lovemap broken beyond repair!!! looks like these two queers are going to have a good time. masterful writing i will be reading for the third time any time now

witness July 29, 2025 at 11:18:51 PM

sorryr i jsut finished this and im crying really hard and very emotional and this feels lioke art adn irelate so hard to havign a fucked up broken family like that (even tho nothign phsycial happened) so it really really really hit me hard and I and i love ambrose i want to ake sure shes happy and that she feesl loved and has the captacity to heal even if she feels like its impawssible i lvoe yewr writign deaddeaddeath

Anarcho Tribadist July 29, 2025 at 11:18:30 PM

I loved this

gretcheen July 29, 2025 at 11:18:07 PM

Another banger by death this is going to live in me forever

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